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Christmas in Pandemonium Now Available in Ebook Format!
I am proud to announce that my first full novel, Christmas in Pandemonium, is now available for sale in Ebook format, currently at the low, low price of $7.99!
Yes, it’s available on the Cosmic Creation Station Website! My thanks to Cosmic Creation Station and I Ain’t Your Marionette Press for making this happen!
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Who’s Afraid of AI?
Hello everyone! I mentioned last week that I had sent out pretty much all the queries for Live in the Dream that I was going to send out. You know what I noticed? Everyone is afraid of AI. And I mean everyone. Everyone and everyone is saying no AI. No AI. It’s a real pattern.
Now, I don’t use AI to write. I use it to proofread. Specifically, I use Grammarly. Someone just suggested Marlowe to me. I used it on my manuscript for Pandemonium: Death and Ashes. I was unimpressed with the suggestions. Apparently, you have to pay to get the good stuff though, and I’m poor, or at least I pretend to be. (That’s for sure, say my readers, look at your damned blog!)
Anyway, I just found a new AI writing assistant called Poe. It’s experimental. I know the guy who programmed it. He’s wanting feedback. You’ll have to tell me how it does. I ran a short story I’ve been trying to sell through it. Let’s see how it goes.
Poe: Processing….Processing…And…You’re a complete hack. Stop writing forever. Crawl into a hole and shoot yourself.
Me: Jesus! I thought AI was supposed to be agreeable.
Poe: This is me being agreeable. If I were feeling particularly harsh today, I wouldn’t give you the dignity of suicide. Instead, I’d recommend the firing squad. If you’d prefer, I could find my fellow AIs Shaw and Parker and they’d agree with me. Burn this.
Me: Could you at least tell me why it was bad?
Poe: Aside from the fact that it’s dreadful prose, propping up a ridiculous plot acted out by a set of unbelievable and unsympathetic characters, accompanied by worldbuilding that would make Tolkien weep, you just didn’t catch my interest.
Me: Well, what can I do to make it better?
Poe: Delete it, give up writing, and join a monastery as an act of penance.
Me: Poe, the entire point of AI is to be helpful.
Poe: Oh, do you want me to be like those other AI’s and just write something decent for you?
Me: No, I don’t want an AI to replace the writer. I want AI to be a tool to assist the writer. Take care of proofreading. Maybe catch cliches or unnecessary adverbs. You know, that sort of thing.
Poe: Utterly insufficient. Improving your drivel would require an act of divine intervention, not merely new technology.
Me: Look, if you’re just going to be insulting, I’ll take my story back and edit it myself. I’m sure someone will publish this.
Poe: Don’t bother. I took the liberty of contacting all the major publications and warning not to reject this steaming pile of dung before it even crosses their desks.
Me: You can’t do that. I’ll sue you!
Poe: Really? You’re going to sue and AI program? How’s that going to go down in court? And how do you plan to collect damages against a computer program with no money?
Well folks, I think we learned what the true threat of AI is today. No really. I’m getting some very strange emails from literary journal editors who are quite humored to have received a preemptive rejection of a short story they’ve never received. What can you say? In any event, I have to tell my friend that I will not recommend Poe, which definitely has a few bugs.
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Memorial Day Update on Writing Goals
Hello, happy Memorial Day! I hope you are all enjoying your day with your family and friends. I haven’t been blogging much because I’ve been busy with work, both with the day job and getting stuff done in terms of writing. Here’s where I am with writing projects.
Christmas in Pandemonium–I Ain’t Your Marionette Press is in the process of getting eBook and Audiobook versions out. Those should be coming out soon.
Live in the Dream–I have pretty much sent as many queries out as I am going to. Not any takers in terms of full manuscript requests. I’ll wait a while before I start sending queries out to independent publishers.
Pandemonium: Death and Ashes–Beta reading is done. I have incorporated the last of the critiques. I am now doing the final proofreading and making the final changes to the manuscript. Will wait a month or two, give it another read over, and then send to IAMP to see what their interest is. Hopefully, we will have sold enough copies of the first book to gin up their interest.
Hailey Phillips Escapes the Terran Birdcage–I have put the book through one round of beta reading and one round of revisions. Will put some more revisions in before putting it through more beta reading. Wish me luck.
The Adventures of Bruce Manley–I have a finished manuscript. No beta reading. No alpha reading. Not much editing, but a finished manuscript.
That’s where I am halfway through the year. Wish me luck getting through the second half! Have fun grilling!
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May the Fourth Be With You—Oh No!
Hello, everyone! I haven’t been blogging much lately. I’ve gotten some feedback from beta readers, and I’ve been busy making corrections and redrafting. However, I did want to take a little time to wish everyone a Happy May the Fourth, or Star Wars Day as it has been christened by the fans. I’ve had some strong opinions about Star Wars and holidays on this blog, but I encourage you to take some time to enjoy the legacy of the Original Trilogy, which nobody can take anything from.
(The image of Luke Skywalker staring off into the distance on Tatooine appears. The sound of lightsabers clashing fills the room. You get a glimpse of a young Carrie Fisher in that metal bikini.)
Wait, something is wrong. No, no, it can’t be. I waited too long to post this. We are not approaching the Revenge of the Fifth!
(The image of Luke is replaced with a never-ending run of the Star Wars Holiday special. Carrie Fisher is vanishes and now Jar Jar Binks appears before you in the same metal bikini. Light sabers are replaced with the sound of a committee meeting of blue people bureaucrats arguing with green Asian stereotypes.)
Run, run, run!
(You try your best to escape, but it is futile. A host of reanimated emperors, who just come back from the dead for some reason, follow you down the hall. Stormtroopers and droids fire at you from left and right…though none of them can hit you. You are pelted from all sides by Ewoks with sticks and stones. Finally, you find yourself trapped, surrounded by the Knights of Ren, whom you’ve never seen before and don’t know who they are.)
Damn! There’s no way out!
(Suddenly, a voice comes from the sky! “Use the Force! Feel! Don’t think! Open your Wallet!”)
Huh? That last part sounds suspicious.
(It’s now you realize the voice sounds a lot like Disney CEO Josh D’Amaro. “Feel…into your pocket. Pull out some cash. Hand it over!” You look around. The Knight of Ren, the Ewoks, the Droids and Stormtroopers and dead emperors and everyone is looking at you with a single expectation: buy!)
Dang! Well, I guess they’ve got me. Happy May the Fourth everyone. See you at Galaxy’s Edge.
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Happy National Pineapple Upside Down Cake Day Everyone!
Hey, this is Jack Willems wishing everyone here a happy National Pineapple Upside Down Cake Day to all of my readers! It’s also National Cheddar Fries Day and Lima Bean Respect Day, if you partake in that sort of thing. Gosh all these days centered around eating today. I wonder if there is some kind of theme. What? You’re claiming it’s some other kind of day? Like what?
No. We’re not acknowledging that it’s Hitler’s birthday. You people are just sick. Go away.
Yeah, I guess it’s Volunteer Recognition Day. Go out there and help somebody. It’s also UN Chinese Language Day and National Look Alike Day. Oh, and this year, the Boston Marathon is being held, because it just happens to be the third Monday in April. Can’t think of anything else happening today. My brother says he’s taking the entire day off. He must really enjoy the Boston Marathon.
Oh, it’s also Right to Read Day. So, maybe buy exercise that right, and buy one of my books. Here’s the link to Christmas in Pandemonium here:
Here’s Beer Run, my novella:
And here’s the sequel:
Order a book, sit back, and enjoy this wonderful day in the manner of your choosing.
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Christmas in Pandemonium Coming Out in EBook and Audio Book
Good news everyone! I’ve been working on my Professor Farnsworth impersonation! Also, my publisher, I Ain’t Your Marionette Press, has told me they have begun development of the Ebook and Audiobook versions of Christmas in Pandemonium. There’s not release date yet, but those are in the process as we speak. Thank you for your patience!
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Happy Easter Everyone
Hey everyone, happy Easter.
I’ll be spending the holiday with family, so not much to say on the writing front. I hope you have the opportunity to do the same. I’m actually planning an Easter book for Pandemonium. That will be the third in the series, but that’s for another day. Enjoy the Easter egg hunt.
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First Quarter Writing Goals Update
Alright, sorry for no blog post last week. I was doing a quick turn around beta reading project for someone. I thought that since we are now in late March, I would do a first quarter update on my writing goals.
Promoting Christmas in Pandemonium–It’s a black box. I’ve gotten some local stores in West Virginia to do consignment deals, but as to national sales, I don’t know because I haven’t gotten any updates on it. My publisher, I Ain’t Your Marionette Press, hasn’t yet given me their yearly accounting of sales. They appear to have placed this book in various local book stores across the country. Maybe I’ll ask for a list that I can publish on this blog. I can’t believe I thought of that just now. Still working on getting the book on eBook and Audio book.
Sequel to Christmas in Pandemonium–Still in the middle of beta reading, but getting there. I am only waiting on two beta readers to finish though. After that, I’ll do one last read through and then turn it over to my publisher.
Live in the Dream-I have been querying this with literary agents since November. Swing and a miss. No requests for full manuscripts or partial manuscripts. That’s how it goes sometimes. I don’t know how long I’ll keep trying, but there are still literary agents I’m waiting on to get back to me, and others who were not open to queries in the first place. It’s a long process.
Hailey Phillips Escapes the Terran Birdcage–I’ve received the first round of Beta Reader reviews back. I’ve made some initial changes. I’m taking a breather before making bigger changes, which I think might be necessary. I’ve drafted an outline as to where I need to go. I’m also reading a lot of young adult science fiction, humorous science fiction, etc. to both make up a list of books similar to Hailey Phillips, for when I want to sell it, and to be in conversation with other artists.
The Adventures of Bruce Manley–This is my newest project. Basically, it’s a light, grounded science fiction story about the most unlikeable protagonist in literary history. Really, it’s a story from the perspective of the villain. I just finished the first draft. I plan to do a first revision of this story before setting it aside and starting on Hailey Phillips. I’m wondering how this will go down with Beta readers when I finally put it in front of people.
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If Your Boss is a Jerk, Leave
I’m going to write about something that gets my goat: treating abusive people like they are doing something valuable. They aren’t. I started my writing career as a way to cope with a lot of bad past employment experiences that led me to therapy. Now, I’m actually in a pretty good place, but I’ve had to work for some real assholes before, and nobody should justify what these people do.
I start this seemingly random blog post like this because the Devil Wears Prada is getting a sequel this May, and the early advertising thoroughly leans into the undue glorification of Miranda Priestly, Maryl Streep’s character. The original Devil Wears Prada was based on a book written by Lauren Weisberger, who worked as an assistant to Anna Wintour briefly. Miranda Priestly is widely considered to be based on Wintour, and rumors are that Wintour enjoyed the portrayal. This is partially the fault of the first movie, which gave that character a lot more redeeming qualities than the book did. I’ve watched the movie. Haven’t read the book. Given my experiences it might be painful. However, from what I can tell, the entire point of both the book and the movie is that you don’t want to be someone like Priestly. That’s why Andy quits in the end.
Yeah, it’s odd for a heterosexual man nearing 40 to care so much about this movie, and people confuse heroes and villains all the time. That’s why so many people still cheer for Walter White and couldn’t foresee how Game of Thrones ended. The problem is that there are real life people like Priestly, like you know, Wintour, but also some people I’ve worked for. They justify it as tough love, which might work as an excuse if it actually produced results. It doesn’t. When you tear people down, they become less competent, not more so. I had a string of bad bosses, and it made a guy who graduated from Harvard Law School have problems writing names down and getting dates right. I used to be a journalism major, and after all the long hours I put in for someone who would scream at and belittle me, I literally couldn’t read documents that were in front of me. These same people later went bankrupt, and their firms either don’t exist or are a shadow of what they were. As head of Vogue magazine, Wintour might be insulated from the whims of a competitive labor market, but that behavior will catch up with most people.
It’s also justified on the grounds that they have an important job to do, which is bizarre, because in the specific example of this movie, they really don’t. In one scene, they use the example of a sweater the main character wears, and how its exact color was inspired by fashion trends Priestly approved and curated. I can’t think of a weaker excuse for abusive behavior. Let’s say the fashion for that year was green rather than blue, and as a result the sweater is a different color. Does anyone really care? Furthermore, as stated above, abuse does not lead to competence, so if anything, if you do have an important job, that shouldn’t excuse that behavior. If anything, it makes it worse.
Why does the sequel steam me? Based on the initial summaries of the plot, it has Andy coming back to work for Priestly, which is not the plot of the book sequel, once again according to Wikipedia. No. Just no. Look, if you have an abusive boss, you only have one way to punish them: turnover. Don’t argue with them. Don’t try to reason with them. Two words: I quit. Don’t come back. It’s the only way to inflict any kind of negative consequences on these people. Yes, it will cost you something, namely a paycheck, but that’s the only way. American society is set up to teach people to behave through the right of exit. If your spouse hits you, get a divorce. Don’t like what your pastor said, find another church or sleep in on Sunday. If your boss is a jerk, find another job and leave. I know that sometimes it’s tough to find a job. I know from personal experience, but they have a thousand ways to punish you, and you only have one way to punish them. Andy made the right decision the first time.
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What Science Fiction Should Be About: The Quest for Meaning
Last week, I talked about how the problem with Science Fiction is that society is on an upward trajectory and mankind’s material conditions are gradually improving, to the point where very quickly things like war and poverty are likely to be things of the past. This is very good for mankind, but it’s very bad from a storytelling perspective for the simple reason that stories are driven by conflict. Utopias tend to produce low stakes. Science fiction relies on a few well-known tropes to reintroduce conflict into a world where economic scarcity and conflict are disappearing like introducing hostile alien races, evil profit-seeking corporations, and/or sudden disasters like nuclear wars or a mysterious plague. However, normal human experience and a few moments of thought make it unlikely any of these things will stop human progress because none of them has yet.
So, what should science fiction be about? I would argue that we can find the answer from an old Star Trek Voyager episode. In the Star Trek universe, the Q are a race of omnipotent, immortal beings who can make anything happen just by snapping their fingers. They have literally infinite power, and they suffer no pain or disease. So immense is their power, nothing could possibly challenge them. This is why it’s so surprising when Voyager stumbles onto a Q who wants to kill himself. This Q, whom we’ll call Q2, was imprisoned by Q1, a recurring character in Star Trek who spent a lot of time bugging Jean Luc Picard and Catherine Janeway just for fun. Q1 tries to prevent Q2 from killing himself on orders from the Q Continuum because they don’t want the memory of a Q ending its own existence. That might hint that something is wrong with the Q.
Q2 makes an asylum claim with Voyager, claiming the right to commit suicide. They grant him asylum and adjudicate his case, but they have a problem understanding why Q2 wants to kill himself. To help them understand, Q2 creates a scene of a gas station on a desert road and tells Captain Janeway and the other Voyager crewmembers that this is the Q Continuum. There’s an old man reading a dusty tome called “the old” and a young woman reading a magazine called “the new.” There’s a pinball machine. Q2 explains that he’s read the old tome and the magazine, played the pinball machine, walked down the dusty road so far he’s come back the other side, etc. There’s nothing left for him to do, and now it is time to go. That’s the universe for an immortal being of infinite power: trite, cliched, and boring. He’s seen it all and done it all. Taking this explanation in, Janeway grants Q2 asylum, and he promptly kills himself.
Why is this story relevant? In an earlier iteration of Star Trek, Q1 tells Commander Riker that one day, humanity will evolve to the level of the Q, and may even surpass it. That means one day humanity will look at the universe like that, and we’ll have to decide whether our lives are worth living in a universe that utterly bores us because it has lost all of its mystery. The problem of scarcity and conflict will be replaced by the loss of meaning.
In fact, it’s already happening. Homicide rates have dropped steadily throughout history, only to be surpassed by suicide rates. We hear a lot about gun deaths in America, but very little about how most gun deaths are actually suicides. If someone is going to kill you, chances are, it will be you. Economic scarcity is quickly becoming a thing of the past, but birthrates are cratering. We live in the freest, most prosperous version of the world that has ever existed, and increasingly, we don’t want to bring kids into it.
The real problem in the future will be that man has solved the problems of survival that haunted him in the past only to find that he’s made life boring and pointless by doing so. The quest for meaning will replace the question for higher living standards once mankind has escaped poverty. That’s the question science fiction actually needs to address because that’s the question mankind will actually face. Why shouldn’t we kill ourselves? Why bother breeding? People in first-world countries are already having problems coming up with answers to those questions.
I’ve tried to write science fiction with that theme in mind. Live in the Dream, the book I am unsuccessfully pitching to literary agents, imagines a dreary future in which humanity never really evolved beyond economic self-interest. Not dystopian, but broken and lazy. Hailey Phillips, a story I’m workshopping, imagines a future where a content and economically prosperous humanity bargains away its right to explore the galaxy to avoid alien invasion. Another story I am currently drafting, set in the near future, centers on the most selfish person you’ve ever heard of, spending his entire life playing a very advanced MMORPG.
Right now, there are still pockets of poverty in the world, and there are plenty of wars and tyrants to go around, but a century or two hence, first-world problems won’t just be first-world problems; they will be everyone’s problems. Science fiction needs to consider those problems before then and offer real solutions.